Topic: "Your friend has emailed you, asking what sports and activities are popular in your country. "
Writing Grade: 95
Your writing with corrections: http://www.englishtown.com/school/course/progressreportv2.aspx
Thank you for completing the task. You were able to develop your ideas well, and only minimal corrections were needed.
Please note the comments below.
Word Choice: Remember to carefully choose the correct words for the writing - "Most people in my country love playing football and going swimming" makes more sense than "most people in my country love playing football and swimming". Capitalized Letters: Be careful with the usage of capitalized letters. You should start the new sentences with the capitalized letters, so it should be ''In the winter''.