Because the sentences are not too long, the writing is concise. Next, the text is clear, due to specificity of detail. However, despite the clarity and conciseness, this writing fails. Why? Essentially, this paragraph is unintelligible. The page layout makes it nearly impossible for the reader to understand the text.
Using highlighting techniques (tables, headings and subheadings, different font sizes, column lines, and white space), below is a revised copy of the information presented on page 14.