opic: "Your American friend is on vacation and has emailed you. The weather is terrible. She is bored. Write your friend an email and make suggestions about things to do. "
Writing Grade: 100
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Thank you for completing the task. You were able to develop your ideas well, and no corrections were needed.
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Dear Faisal Thank you for your writing submission, this was a great article on talking about the weather and you used some good questioning techniques. Remember the verb tense (VT) 'to go' as you missed this out when you said 'you should shopping', you should have said 'you should go shopping'. Be careful of those minor mistakes and check for spelling and capital letters before you submit your writing. Well done once again with this writing submission. I wish you all the best with your studies. In order to improve your writing further, do use the study tools found on Englishtown (online).
Overall, you did well. Keep up the great work! Please have a look at the various study tools to help you further develop your English. We look forward to your next submission.